Interesting
After having trouble understanding your intro I read your authors comments and it made a bit more sense. Maybe you could put your play on a webpage and have a link from your comments or the movie itself.
Graphics: Interesting well made graphics you have there. Pseudo anime but with a western touch.
Gameplay: It was a little hard without much reward. Although simple
Audio: The voices in the intro were quite good. For the actual game music maybe you could make or commision a song implicating the hospital sounds you used.
Keep up the good work
-Rhabdophobia