You show promise
You show promise in your animations. I will look foraward to your next work.
Graphics: It appears you have tried to master the basics of flash before making something in a grander scale. This is a very good idea.
Audio: I didn't really like the song but it fitted in with the movie pretty well. You can really tell that your voice work was done through a computer program though, maybe you could visit the NGBBS Voice Actors Club and comission some work from there.
Keep up the good work
-Rhabdophobia