Great work
That was some good work there. Like the last reviewer was saying you need to give new information some time to settle before jumping to the next piece. Despite this it was a good little piece of entertainment.
Graphics: Good work on the graphics, slightly clunky in movement but really well drawn.
Audio: A huge fan of the Sneaker Pimps and smooth jazz, I thought the music in this was excellent. During the diner scene you could add some talking voices in the background, maybe some plates clattering to give it a more cafe feel.
Keep up the good work
-Rhabdophobia